I'm always happy to see representation of being a young trans boy. Some parts definitely reminded me of my own adolescence! It was a nice quick game and I encourage you to keep making stuff like this! I know this game is 4 years old now so I'm sure you've been working on your creativity since, but since you asked for advice I'd suggest working a bit on characterisation :) what I mean by that is if we're only with a character for a short time then every detail is significant, so it would be nice to elaborate on some specific memories the characters has like ripping his jeans, his friend who bought him his hoodie etc, a bit more detail to make the character feel more specific and real. But like I said, I found the character endearing and enjoyed the game.
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I'm always happy to see representation of being a young trans boy. Some parts definitely reminded me of my own adolescence! It was a nice quick game and I encourage you to keep making stuff like this! I know this game is 4 years old now so I'm sure you've been working on your creativity since, but since you asked for advice I'd suggest working a bit on characterisation :) what I mean by that is if we're only with a character for a short time then every detail is significant, so it would be nice to elaborate on some specific memories the characters has like ripping his jeans, his friend who bought him his hoodie etc, a bit more detail to make the character feel more specific and real. But like I said, I found the character endearing and enjoyed the game.